
My favourite piece of technology is my Mp3 player. It's a Philips GoGear.
I got it 1 year and a half ago, I was joining(Ww) money to buy it because
the previous one didn't work. I use it like a Pen-Drive, I plug it in the PC
and I keep my favourite music and I listen(Sm) it in the bus. I use it
everyday( they{ every and day} should always go separately) because the music
is a good mate(Ww) in(Wp) the bus, because without music I go(Ww) boring(Wt) in(Wp) the bus. Also it have(Wf) radio, and I use it when there are(Wf) a match of Colo-Colo, because I don't have TV cable to watch the matches. I like it because it have(Wf) a sober design, because it have(Wf) a(Wf) RECHEARGABLE INTERNAL (Wo) battery, and THE MUSIC IS LISTENED(Nn+Ww) clearly. My life without my Mp3 player would be terrible because I couldn't listen to my music in the bus, my travel would be
boring and I would have to listen to reggaeton of "flaites"(flaites’) mobile phones... booooo!!!!!
Joining: you can join two pieces together, you can joing your friends for lunch( you go with them), you can also join a club.
Money: In this case... you can make money( make= earn), and sav money ( = keep or not spending your money, in order to have more and more money) .
You listen TO music - You hear a noise in the backyard.
The sound is clear could be an option.
“My travel would be boring”: I understand your point, but the word for that is COMMUTE= the journey between home and work/university.