Definitely(P) my favorite piece o(Sp) technology is mi(Sp) iPod, i(C) got my first iPod 2 years ago, when my father arrived from USA and gave it to me,(P) that was a(Wf) iPod shuffle and nobody have(Wt) one in the class,(P) i(C) was so excited cuz i(C) love listen(Wf) (Sm) music and the
(We) is so long,(P) so(C) i(C) traveled really bored without any distraction. After one(Ww) year or more time a fucking burglar stole it in the bus (Nn),(P) in(C) the summer of 2006 i(C) started to work for(Ww) buy other iPod(P) and i(C) achieve(Wt) it again (P) i(C) bought a(Wf) iPod shuffle but the new have(Wf) more space for music and is (Ww)tan(Sp) (Sm) old iPod. I use it every day, when i(C) travel in bus, underground or when i (Sm) walking,(P) i(C) can't stay without listen(Wf)(Sm) music, i(C) don't understand < MYSELF WHI IS> (Nn)the reason for that, but i(C) don't care it. When i(C) was(Wt) without music i(C) felt(Wt) empty, bored and i(C) don't have mood for(Ww) do anything, my life is the music and without ir(Sp) i (C)can`t function correctly. My iPod is full with a lot (Sm) (Sm= ALL) kind(Wf) of music, but (Sm)recently i( X) putted(Wf) noisy music, like: Orchid, Ampere and Tristan Tzara, FOR HAVE A GREAT AND FUNNY TRAVELS ACROSS THE (?). I love my mp3 (X + Nn) !
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Pedro:
Please don't write "i". I know what you mean, but it is always ---> I.
The sentence: "travel university-house and house-university", it's wrong expression... the word for that is = COMMUTE. So, " THE COMMUTE from home to the university..."
and you listen TO music, listen to the radio, listen to the teacher, listening to music etc etc
you are fine, but you need to pay more attention to the little details.
and..try to correct it, I'm sure you'll correct once or twice the same mistakes and then, you'll remember.
Take Care,
Bye!!
any doubts, just ask me.
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